Minor Surgery

Said he to she
  dismissively
It's only
  minor surgery

Said she to he
  lightheartedly
Give me the knife
  I'll play with your life
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Bush Avatar
February 23, 2020 at 1:00 PM
Yikes! I had major surgery in 2008. Never again. Keep your knife outta my sight!!
Wolf Avatar
February 23, 2020 at 6:33 PM
I'm with you all the way, Jean. My knee replacement in 2016 just about killed me. Never again, just like the Holocaust! :) Gershon
Krutsinger Avatar
February 22, 2020 at 10:32 PM
"just surgery" - two words that cancel each other out.
Wolf Avatar
February 22, 2020 at 10:58 PM
Precisely! Thanks, Caren. May we never know from more 'procedures.' :) Gershon
Adams Avatar
February 22, 2020 at 8:20 AM
oh...ouch! it's never only surgery, each can be serious even if minor... hugs
Wolf Avatar
February 22, 2020 at 10:58 PM
Lest we forget: Surgery is an invasive procedure. Hope I never have another one. You too, S.A! Cheers, gw
Somadas Avatar
February 21, 2020 at 11:53 PM
Funny Gershon again..
Wolf Avatar
February 22, 2020 at 10:56 PM
Yours is a funny comment too Jenish with, or, without, commas! :) gw
Faulkner Avatar
February 21, 2020 at 4:02 PM
Funny - after being married for almost 15 years (our anniversary's in September) my husband just TODAY authorized me on his bank account - of course, it took cancer to make him do it (dark humor, gotta have it!)
Wolf Avatar
February 22, 2020 at 10:55 PM
Humor, however and whatever, always makes the medicine a little more palatable... Thanks, Michelle
Bauer Avatar
February 21, 2020 at 1:42 PM
Ha! Touché! Nice one, Gershon!
Wolf Avatar
February 22, 2020 at 10:54 PM
Hey, thanks for the endorsement on this one, Ilene. ~ Bullseye Bart
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