Minimonoverse ~ Swimming Pool..!!

Mini-monoverse

The Mini-monoverse is a poetry form originated by Emily Romano.  Each Mini-monoverse is

made up of two stanzas of five three-syllable lines.  They rhyme scheme is a/a/a/a/a for the 
first

stanza and b/b/b/b/b for the second stanza.  For a double Mini-monoverse just add two more

stanzas.  They rhyme scheme for the third stanza should be  c/c/c/c/c and for the fourth 
stanza,

d/d/d/d/d.  It is desirable that the Mini-monoverse tell a story, but this is not a hard and fast 
rule.

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Cold Swimming pool

Lo Behold.!!
Icy cold
Jumped in and rolled
Advanced uncontrolled
Agony untold

Stupid act
Very Bad impact
Inability to react
Matter of fact..
Forgot to retract
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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May 29, 2010 at 4:41 PM
This is just so wonderful. I know all about those icy cold water. Welcome to Poetry Soup and keep writing. Great job! Joseph
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