Minimalist: You May Forget But
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Riviera Night (my own title)
Your kisses were smoother than
the leather of the seat
on which we sat embracing.
I pray our last night
lingers in your memory too.
Written Oct. 15, 2017
for nette onclaud's "The Minimalist Form" Poetry Contest
Five lines of five words per line.
*Riviera is a luxury model of Buick that stopped being made around 1999.
Dedicated to Quebec-born Guy Loranger, wherever he may be.
Copyright © Andrea Dietrich | Year Posted 2017
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