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Riviera Night (my own title) Your kisses were smoother than the leather of the seat on which we sat embracing. I pray our last night lingers in your memory too. Written Oct. 15, 2017 for nette onclaud's "The Minimalist Form" Poetry Contest Five lines of five words per line. *Riviera is a luxury model of Buick that stopped being made around 1999. Dedicated to Quebec-born Guy Loranger, wherever he may be.

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Date: 10/23/2017 11:14:00 AM
A lovely romantic lingering memory, Andrea. Congratulations on your fine win. Regards // paul
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Date: 10/22/2017 6:53:00 AM
Congrats Andrea, for your placement with this awesome piece! ;-)
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Date: 10/21/2017 6:41:00 PM
Dropping back to say many congrats on your win Andrea:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 10/21/2017 5:45:00 PM
Andrea, congratulations on your win well done.mmmm embracing on leather seat they are so sweaty. :) Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 10/21/2017 5:12:00 PM
winsome interpretation of the theme, andie...you win big, hands down with much delight as i thank you for joining... where can i find that buick?
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Date: 10/17/2017 8:45:00 PM
Excellent piece, Andrea--love the simile! Janice
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Date: 10/17/2017 10:08:00 AM
What a happy memory.
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Date: 10/17/2017 9:08:00 AM
Hi Andrea, I really enjoyed this piece. It was sad but it was also romantic. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis
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Date: 10/16/2017 10:53:00 PM
A sweet poem--happy memories!
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Date: 10/16/2017 9:47:00 PM
Saucy fabulous pen :) My best to you for the contest Andrea xomo!
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Date: 10/16/2017 8:44:00 PM
He was a "smoooooth operator", Andrea. Yeah, I'm feeling this one. Short and sweet for sure! ;)
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Date: 10/16/2017 8:30:00 PM
I could see and feel the leather seating. Nicely done, Andrea!
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Date: 10/16/2017 5:46:00 PM
A lovely write Andrea..does it say Ringo in the back?
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Date: 10/16/2017 5:18:00 PM
PHWARRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR I recall reading about your encounter before! Beautifully penned Andrea!:-) hugs jan xx
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