Subimal Sinha-Roy Poet Free verse

Minimalist - Closed Path

Searched you in dark outside
The road ended in despair
The journey lost in confusion
Discovered an open door within
Lighted, you’re defined for me.

October 18, 2017.
Contest : Minimalist Form

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Andrea Dietrich October 22, 2017 at 8:57 PM oh, how nice. I love how you did your last line for this one. Congrats on the win. Subimal Sinha-Roy October 22, 2017 at 10:57 PM Thank you Andrea for liking the poem. Yes, the inner light defines HIM.

Jan Allison October 21, 2017 at 6:48 PM many congrats on your win Subimal:-) hugs jan xx Subimal Sinha-Roy October 22, 2017 at 10:56 PM Thank you, Jan.

Eve Roper October 21, 2017 at 5:52 PM Subimal, congratulations on your win well done.. :) Hugs Eve ~`* Subimal Sinha-Roy October 22, 2017 at 10:55 PM Thank you Eve for visiting.

Nette Onclaud October 21, 2017 at 5:40 PM a well-deserved placement for finely expressed piece, suminal... best congrats and thanks for entering this challenge... Subimal Sinha-Roy October 22, 2017 at 10:55 PM Thank you, Nette for your appreciatiion.

Rhoma Em October 18, 2017 at 11:03 AM Amazing short poem. The beginning and middle parts are well woven though I couldn't understand the last line. Thank you. Subimal Sinha-Roy October 22, 2017 at 10:54 PM Thank you, Rhoma for visiting.