Teddy Kimathi Poet Free verse

Minimalist

Lyrics absorbed in bitter tears;
leaves fallen like early autumn.
Gods mourn as darkness falls,
enveloping around an oak tree
the sage always meditated under.



Date of Entry: 19/10/2017

Contest Name: MINIMALIST FORM

Contest Theme: Minimalist - SONG OF DESPAIR

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Paul Callus October 23, 2017 at 11:36 AM I truly like your take on this despair theme, Teddy. Congrats on your fine win. Regards // paul Teddy Kimathi November 8, 2017 at 4:55 PM Greetings Paul. Thank you for reading and enjoying my piece! :-)

Andrea Dietrich October 22, 2017 at 8:49 PM VEry nice, Teddy. I'm glad to see this on the winners' list. Congrats. Teddy Kimathi November 8, 2017 at 4:53 PM Hi Andrea. Thank you so much for your warm applause! I really appreciate it! *^_^*

Janice Canerdy October 22, 2017 at 7:37 AM Well-written and moving, Teddy. Congrats! Janice Teddy Kimathi November 8, 2017 at 4:52 PM Thank you so much for your kind applause, Janice! *^_^*

Jan Allison October 21, 2017 at 5:59 PM Dropping back to say many congrats on your win Teddy:-) hugs Jan xx Teddy Kimathi October 21, 2017 at 8:14 PM Thank you so much for your warm applause, Jan! I really appreciate it! *^_^*

Eve Roper October 21, 2017 at 5:41 PM Teddy, congratulations on your win well done.. :) Hugs Eve ~`* Teddy Kimathi October 21, 2017 at 8:12 PM Greetings, Eve. Thank you so much for your kind applause! *^_^*

Nette Onclaud October 21, 2017 at 4:50 PM such depth with tinges of zen-like thoughts... congrats on your high award and thanks for supporting this challenge, teddy.. huggs Teddy Kimathi October 21, 2017 at 8:11 PM Welcome, Nette! I really enjoyed your contest! ;-) Thank you so much for your warm applause, and enjoying my piece! *^_^*

Jan Allison October 20, 2017 at 6:34 PM beautiful and sad teddy good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx Teddy Kimathi October 21, 2017 at 8:08 PM Thank you so much, Jan! *^_^*

Charlie Smith October 19, 2017 at 10:35 AM Minimally enough said Teddy, good luck in the contest... Teddy Kimathi October 21, 2017 at 8:06 PM Thank you so much, Charlie! :-)

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart October 19, 2017 at 9:14 AM Emotion provoking pen, well done, my best to you for the contest xomo Teddy Kimathi October 21, 2017 at 8:06 PM Thank you so much, Maureen! *^_^*