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Lyrics absorbed in bitter tears; leaves fallen like early autumn. Gods mourn as darkness falls, enveloping around an oak tree the sage always meditated under. Date of Entry: 19/10/2017 Contest Name: MINIMALIST FORM Contest Theme: Minimalist - SONG OF DESPAIR

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Date: 10/23/2017 11:36:00 AM
I truly like your take on this despair theme, Teddy. Congrats on your fine win. Regards // paul
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 11/8/2017 4:55:00 PM
Greetings Paul. Thank you for reading and enjoying my piece! :-)
Date: 10/22/2017 8:49:00 PM
VEry nice, Teddy. I'm glad to see this on the winners' list. Congrats.
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 11/8/2017 4:53:00 PM
Hi Andrea. Thank you so much for your warm applause! I really appreciate it! *^_^*
Date: 10/22/2017 7:37:00 AM
Well-written and moving, Teddy. Congrats! Janice
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 11/8/2017 4:52:00 PM
Thank you so much for your kind applause, Janice! *^_^*
Date: 10/21/2017 5:59:00 PM
Dropping back to say many congrats on your win Teddy:-) hugs Jan xx
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 10/21/2017 8:14:00 PM
Thank you so much for your warm applause, Jan! I really appreciate it! *^_^*
Date: 10/21/2017 5:41:00 PM
Teddy, congratulations on your win well done.. :) Hugs Eve ~`*
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 10/21/2017 8:12:00 PM
Greetings, Eve. Thank you so much for your kind applause! *^_^*
Date: 10/21/2017 4:50:00 PM
such depth with tinges of zen-like thoughts... congrats on your high award and thanks for supporting this challenge, teddy.. huggs
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 10/21/2017 8:11:00 PM
Welcome, Nette! I really enjoyed your contest! ;-) Thank you so much for your warm applause, and enjoying my piece! *^_^*
Date: 10/20/2017 6:34:00 PM
beautiful and sad teddy good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 10/21/2017 8:08:00 PM
Thank you so much, Jan! *^_^*
Date: 10/19/2017 10:35:00 AM
Minimally enough said Teddy, good luck in the contest...
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 10/21/2017 8:06:00 PM
Thank you so much, Charlie! :-)
Date: 10/19/2017 9:14:00 AM
Emotion provoking pen, well done, my best to you for the contest xomo
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 10/21/2017 8:06:00 PM
Thank you so much, Maureen! *^_^*

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