Mini-Golf

Played a round of mini golf today Hot and sunny, too hot to play Too much sun got me Curtailed my glee Poor old duffer, please send a bouquet
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Sivey Avatar
September 22, 2017 at 12:18 PM
Ok, you want some roses or lilies? I guess some carnations would be best for a good friend! I surely loved reading this illustrious poem this afternoon! What a grandiose piece, Great Work!!
Ellison Avatar
September 22, 2017 at 1:29 PM
Too hot a day methinks... your favourite weather!!! LOL
Flats Avatar
September 22, 2017 at 8:41 AM
You might be up a crick//from excessive limerick//After golfing//need some Rolfing//To limber up your schtick. (!) PLAY ON JACKSONG!!!
Ellison Avatar
September 22, 2017 at 9:53 AM
Hey, I is an old geezer!!! PLEASE BE GENTLE!!! lol
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