Mini-Golf

Vicious storms rolled through... we got sopped Played Mini-Golf dancing between the raindrops A fun time for all Swatting the wee ball Came in last but still came out feeling on top
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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June 20, 2017 at 7:57 AM
Some think Jack's flipped his lid//but really he's just a big kid//It ain't uncouth//It's the fountain of youth!//Keep beeing silly, ya won't skid. GOOD MORNING JACKSON!!!
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June 20, 2017 at 8:20 AM
Being silly is guaranteed!!! Sure had a blast! GOOD MORNING BACK, JOHN JOHN!!!
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June 20, 2017 at 7:33 AM
Does anybody ever really win at mini golf? It's a place to go and have fun. If you had fun, you were a winner:)
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June 20, 2017 at 7:39 AM
It was great fun, you're right! I was a winner!
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