08/19/24
Checked by syllable counter
Let's Mlnlchu on Freedom.
Ninth place
Contest by Mohoh Chutani
I wish for full freedom, at every step of life full freedom to function. No boredom. Uprightness twined. Freedom in speech and in action. Free mind. No fight. Satisfaction. Right ! I wish full freedom. Freedom in speech and in action. Right !
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