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08/19/24

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Let's Mlnlchu on Freedom.

Ninth place

Contest by Mohoh Chutani

Minichu on Freedom


   I wish for full freedom,
   at every step of life full freedom to function.
   No boredom.

   Uprightness twined.
   Freedom in speech and in action.
   Free mind.

   No fight.
   Satisfaction.
   Right !

    I wish full freedom.
    Freedom in speech and in action.
    Right !
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Chutani Avatar
September 18, 2024 at 6:20 AM
Anisha, thanks for participating in my contest and congratulations for your placement. Best, Mohan
Woods Avatar
September 16, 2024 at 7:03 AM
Really well done on form and rhyme! Xo
Rodrigues Avatar
August 20, 2024 at 11:25 AM
Sing-songy…let freedom ring in speech and action! Nicely done, Anisha!
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