Chetta Achara Poet Rhyme

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For: lets Minichu on freedom Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Mohan Chutani

Minichu on Freedom

Will Kingdom's golden bells
ring loud as I enter freedom's eternity?
Music swells

as angels sing;
now join the sweet alternity~
awing

into
God's bright city
queue.

Will Kingdom's golden bells
now join the sweet alternity
queue?

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Mohan Chutani September 18, 2024 at 6:15 AM Chetta, thanks for participating in my contest and congratulations for your placement. Best, Mohan Chetta Achara September 19, 2024 at 12:13 PM Thank you. It was fun, though challenging

Crystol Woods September 16, 2024 at 6:52 AM Love how you put it all together And your take on freedom in eternity! Xo Chetta Achara September 16, 2024 at 5:57 PM Thank you. Minichu is quite a challenge to write.

Hilda Greenhough August 16, 2024 at 9:46 AM This poem is an affirmation of faith. It shines with light. Chetta Achara August 16, 2024 at 11:09 AM Thank you. Minichu are challenging, to say the least.