William Kelii Kekaula Poet Rhyme

Minichu About Pleasure

The sun warms skin like wine.
My breath seizes softly in a heart-tangled beat,
Shades entwine.

Quietness glows,
Silk on shoulders, grapevine so sweet,
It shows.

Esteem,
Two spirits meet
Dream.

The sun warms skin like wine.
Silk on shoulders, grapevine so sweet,
Dream.

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Andrea Dietrich April 30, 2026 at 10:42 AM A beauty, William. Congrats on the win William Kelii Kekaula May 1, 2026 at 2:43 PM Thank you, Andrea, for your thoughtful share.

Linda Alice Fowler April 30, 2026 at 8:56 AM Something very calming about your write William. It is lovely! Congratulations! :) William Kelii Kekaula May 1, 2026 at 2:39 PM A welcoming wealth of words, Linda. You are appreciated, my friend.

Mohan Chutani April 30, 2026 at 7:47 AM William, thanks for participating. The sense of tranquility is brought out well during experience of pleasure. Congratulations for your placement. Best.Mohan William Kelii Kekaula May 1, 2026 at 2:33 PM Thank you, my friend, for my well-placed win. Mahalo.