Miniature Representation

internally I minute amidst such dark depths eternally be .

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Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 9/16/2015 11:18:00 PM

Deep senryu James! Congrats on awesome win!

James Fraser
Date: 10/9/2015 1:22:00 PM

Thank you Dr. Upma. I kinda like this short piece, James :) :)

Marvin G. Celestial

Date: 9/16/2015 7:35:00 PM

Congratz!

James Fraser
Date: 10/9/2015 1:21:00 PM

Thank you kindly, glad to see you can still host contests Marvin ;-) have a blessed weekend, James :) :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/28/2015 5:45:00 PM

We are but a grain of sand, James!! This is what your poem says to me!

James Fraser
Date: 10/9/2015 1:29:00 PM

Indeed we are Andrea. I trust you are well. Have a blessed weekend, hugs//James xx