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Mingling At the Entr'Acte

The cloud of suspense was becoming compact The mood was tense to ensure most impact A baffling mystery had to be cracked A sordid crime they needed to re-enact It was the end of the second act Moments before the entr’acte We stretched went out and snacked I powdered my nose with my compact Nodded to each other matter-of-fact The plot was convoluted enough to distract Had everyone admitting massive confusion intact Was it the lady in red they attacked Was the weapon found in the house that got ransacked Was it the business owner’s computer that they hacked Was the killer the guy with the severe cataract Was it the butler who decided to counteract The wildest theories were purely abstract The play was about to restart and unveil each dirty fact Time to see who was right ‘cause it was all quite action packed AP: 2nd place 2025 Submitted on June 21, 2018 for contest LATE JUNE PREMIERE sponsored by BRIAN STRAND - RANKED 4TH Originally posted on February 28, 2018

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Date: 6/25/2018 3:47:00 PM
Oh geeze! I like this! A compelling write, suspenseful... perfect rhymes. Congratulations on your win!
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Line Gauthier
Date: 6/25/2018 8:04:00 PM
Thank you so much, Susan. Most appreciated.
Date: 6/24/2018 2:23:00 PM
Congrats Line-- and I'm intrigued-- I don't suppose that the play by any chance was ''Mousetrap'? (For all I know it may still be running in London, as it was when I lived there 48 years ago!)
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Line Gauthier
Date: 6/24/2018 2:34:00 PM
The play was totally in my convoluted little head. Comes from watching too many Columbo episodes and the like. LOL
Date: 6/24/2018 9:07:00 AM
Sounds like a real thriller mystery of a play! YOU made it come alive, Line. Congrats on your placement in the contest! :) Gershon
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Line Gauthier
Date: 6/24/2018 1:40:00 PM
Thank you so much, Gershon. It was quite fun to write.
Date: 6/23/2018 8:55:00 PM
Excellent mystery, rhythm and rhymes Line.. a poem of entertaining suspense and intrigue. Congratulations on your wonderful win. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Line Gauthier
Date: 6/23/2018 11:06:00 PM
Thank you so much, Susan. Most appreciated.
Date: 6/23/2018 6:28:00 PM
You ace the writing scene here Line, excellent poem, congrats .
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Line Gauthier
Date: 6/23/2018 11:06:00 PM
Thanks, Pixie. Most appreciated.
Date: 3/1/2018 6:11:00 PM
yet another great monorhyme sweet Line! :)-luloo
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Line Gauthier
Date: 3/1/2018 6:25:00 PM
Thanks for your sweet visit and comment, Laura.
Date: 3/1/2018 3:47:00 PM
Line, you are surely the Queen of the monorhyme. Like your others, this one is imaginative, fun and rhythm.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 3/1/2018 5:28:00 PM
Thank you so much, Geoffrey. Most appreciated.
Date: 3/1/2018 6:36:00 AM
excellent flow,rhyme and intrigue
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Line Gauthier
Date: 3/1/2018 8:56:00 AM
Thank you so much, Harry. Much appreciated.
Date: 3/1/2018 4:31:00 AM
Thoroughly enjoyed your monorhyme Line, really like how you have left the reader in suspense or perhaps you have a sequel, well written. :))
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Line Gauthier
Date: 3/1/2018 8:57:00 AM
Thank you for your lovely visit and comment, Roy.
Date: 3/1/2018 1:31:00 AM
My monies on the butler. Great verse Line.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 3/1/2018 8:57:00 AM
The butler always does it, Roy. Thanks for your visit, my friend.

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