Mine Word Hid, Expresses In This Way

To say a word is meaningful.

but if it meant painful?

better not, because it is pitiful

does it sound useful?


if ain't say a word is sinful,

said it not or better it be to wonderful

hold it not on my belly recently,

can no longer i, could; with it so badly


"i could see not it barely!",

Is what often mine to say,

not with I, sure is playful,

but for you not to be so full.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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June 5, 2013 at 9:04 AM
Archimae. Dropping in with a nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. My name is Linda; I’m here to invite you on over to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* please consider my contest* hopefully you find this place to be the comfort zone your writing pen is looking for. If you ever need or want honest feedback on a certain poem let me know. Stop by anytime you like. I’m looking forward in following you and your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy this community; we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend Linda
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June 2, 2013 at 10:21 PM
congrats. 5th place. Proud to be Pinoy!
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June 1, 2013 at 2:11 PM
CONGRATS!!! love ~SKAT~
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June 1, 2013 at 9:42 AM
Archimae, i don't know why,,, but i enjoyed this poem very much.... Congratulations on your sweet awesome free verse win.... you poem rocks... :-) Linda
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June 1, 2013 at 3:59 AM
many congratulations on your win xx
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