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Mine last hurrah

        Woe is the me 
  if I without supplication
       inflict mine want

        an easy lift
 she is the petite figure 
              of
      mine last hurrah

    No petty kiss from 
      this secrete self
 ‘pon her thankful breast
   no laugh as her press
    doth reach her goal
I was smitten by her sudor

          Like hot oil
    she did glaze the me
and I without the wavering
            forgot 
      mine last hurrah           

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 2/16/2015 10:34:00 AM
Very nice pen James!I enjoyed your smooth carpe diem piece, my dear friend.A 7 from me! I wish you a very lovely day! In his light! God bless you! :) D.
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Date: 2/4/2015 9:10:00 AM
Yes, very cool language weave, James!
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Date: 1/31/2015 9:50:00 PM
love that last part and how she made you forget your last hurrah. Sexy one!
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Date: 1/31/2015 9:19:00 AM
This one makes me smile. A very interesting use of language. Thanks for your visit today it means a lot.
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James Peranteau
Date: 1/31/2015 9:38:00 AM
I told you that I was picky with my writes Richard *smiles*...I don't do this often sir, but I had to modify this write. Thank you for this comment though. Blessings to you Richard....james