Mine Has Arrived First

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The sun still sleeps

as a dark horizon waits

for the 
light of its morning

to illumine its world in beauty,

when I see your eyes open
and realize

mine has arrived first
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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October 7, 2016 at 3:49 AM
Just love the way you write.these beauties ...A favourite.
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September 5, 2018 at 11:19 AM
Thank you so very much my dear sweet girl from Malta. I love when you stop by. P.S., sorry this response is so late...like really late.
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October 6, 2016 at 8:17 AM
This is a gorgeous, in so few words you've encapsulated a tender love story.
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October 6, 2016 at 9:04 AM
Thanks so much Paloma. Sometimes it's what we don't say that has the most impact. :)
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