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Mine Has Arrived First

. The sun still sleeps as a dark horizon waits for the light of its morning to illumine its world in beauty, when I see your eyes open and realize mine has arrived first

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 10/7/2016 3:49:00 AM
Just love the way you write.these beauties ...A favourite.
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Chris Green
Date: 9/5/2018 11:19:00 AM
Thank you so very much my dear sweet girl from Malta. I love when you stop by. P.S., sorry this response is so late...like really late.
Date: 10/6/2016 8:17:00 AM
This is a gorgeous, in so few words you've encapsulated a tender love story.
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Chris Green
Date: 10/6/2016 9:04:00 AM
Thanks so much Paloma. Sometimes it's what we don't say that has the most impact. :)

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