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I found you inside another Not belonging to me I needed you more more than I needed the others You are going to be mine I don't care who I hurt for you You will belong to me I'll chain you untill your bleeding love for me You will love me I'll change you till your all mine I am darkness and you will breath me in

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Date: 11/25/2014 4:24:00 PM
Another intense piece. I felt the darkness of the piece and the last line put a chilling signature on it. Excellent, piercing pain and determination. Always, Laura
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Date: 11/25/2014 4:37:00 PM
Thanks Laura most of my stuff is quite dark even though some of the titles have live in them there still. Haunting. Thanks for taking to read