Mine

Clothes
I love
You throw out
What’s that about?
Who do you think you are? The God of Bods?
The Fashion Assassin?  The King of Things?
It’s not your stuff!
So don’t touch!
Okay?
Hey!

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Carolyn Devonshire

June 21, 2011 at 2:49 PM

You really crack me up, Susan. If you're not already on my list of faves, you'll be there in a moment. My mother used to toss away some of my favorite clothes. LOL Love, Carolyn

Emma Mantle

June 21, 2011 at 6:58 AM

A great piece Susan. A kindred spirit I see! Thanks for stopping by my work, and taking the time to comment. Best wishes Em :)

Sara Kendrick

June 20, 2011 at 8:59 AM

Like this one very much..Modern approach to the form..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Yes, Cody is my grandson who has an inherited mental disease called Huntington's Disease..It causes people that have it to not be able to handle their emotions like normal people..In Cody's family, the people have a lot of anger and hostility..Sara

Tracy Edwards

June 18, 2011 at 4:14 AM

Never mess with a girl n her clothes and dont even touch her shoes... great write Susan xx

Andrea Dietrich

June 17, 2011 at 8:49 PM

this was a fun one, Susan Who is this meanie throwing out your clothes? my hubbie tried to throw out some of mine once. Tossed them all in the garage he was so upset by my growing collection. the crumb bum.

Dr.Ram Mehta

June 17, 2011 at 6:00 PM

Raging and powerful, Susan

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