Mine

The twinkle of a star
Like a sparkle in her eye
Both bring me over the moon
But only one of them is mine

A sunrise over water
Like her smile sipping wine
Both bring me peace and wonder
But only one of them is mine

The song of early birds
Like her laughter's chime
Both make me sing along
But only one of them is mine

The soft passing of a breeze
Like her skins caress divine
Both bring me soothing chills
But only one of them is mine

The world so full of beauty
Which she captures more sublime
Both of them my world
But only one of them is mine


May 2010
This one actually has a second part to it, but um, I haven't even written it yet, who
knows if I will get to it. But yeah, you probably wouldn't think of it but my intention
was to write this for the "Dark Poet" contest. Hmm.
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Beesley Avatar
August 10, 2010 at 3:12 PM
good write stay cautious and careful to remember the dog with 2 bones
Byrne Avatar
June 15, 2010 at 6:09 PM
so charming....smile!
Falotico Avatar
June 12, 2010 at 4:09 AM
Very well written..love the flow
Belt Avatar
June 11, 2010 at 5:38 PM
Um.....This is real Good Destiny...even without part two.....Awesome Write.....Larry
A   Avatar
June 11, 2010 at 4:46 PM
loved it, enjoyed your write...P.D.
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