Makoto Ogino Poet Sonnet

Mindtraveller - 2, Neo Tokio

Megalopolis wants growing whenever,
Even she was full of wealth and honor,
Swallowing lots of loser and goner,
But she's still growing and stops it never.

Megalopolis wants flowing forever,
She washed away people into ruined darkness,
She washed away people from blessed happiness,
But she's still flowing and stops it never.

Yes, people were tired to live in noisy light,
Love was too gloomy, heavy and sticky,
All bonds worked as only restriction to self.

See, people hoped to live in silent night,
Truth was too weak, faith was too picky,
Loneliness was the only way to guard self.


20/Jan/2016
Fengleishanren.

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Anisha Dutta September 27, 2020 at 5:26 AM Nicely composed. I admire. Blessings Makoto Ogino September 27, 2020 at 5:54 AM Thank you for your visiting and kind message as usual. I appreciate it very much.

Poet Destroyer A February 23, 2016 at 9:12 PM Makoto, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA Makoto Ogino March 1, 2016 at 10:00 PM Hi LINDA, thank you for your visiting and kind message. Currently I'm captured by my job, but I'll get free time soon.

Jill Spagnola January 31, 2016 at 12:30 AM Awesome tale! Going to look up "Mindtraveller - 1 and try to get it:), jill I really struggle with sonnets! Makoto Ogino January 31, 2016 at 9:57 PM Dear Jill, thank you for your reading. And appreciate your message. I gave me much encouragement to continue.