Mind’s twister

there is no rain
before a storm
just a deafening sound
of silence

thoughts provoke
bearing down
on the darkness
lingering 
within my mind

a winded breath
shutters
in short gasps
as twist of fate
and fury impede
Inevitable doom

lashing out
are cries 
of pitiful lies 
deceitful pain
inconceivable truths
buried within

a shrouded mask
unveiled
before blind eyes
now illuminated
neath tearless skies

thunderous roars
echoing
erupting
as the force 
rages on

scattered
bits and pieces
of half truths
strewn about 
as silence
falls again 



One that became two becomes one again
Written 10/18/2025
Unseeking seekers contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Godwin Avatar
November 15, 2025 at 7:20 PM
WOW! I like. Did he place you? He never places me, well, maybe once?, Either way, I'm not trying with him any longer. Dark is still easy for you, where you go - all year I've been hoping a bright warming light had come into your life. I remember most of our talks which is amazing considering how much I don't remember. I think we even got into your North Node once??? LEO??
Mcconnell Avatar
October 19, 2025 at 7:32 AM
Great to see you here again Sandra, this is a great write with fine insightful line of thought and good expression too. Have a great weekend, Gordon
Mcintosh Avatar
October 19, 2025 at 2:10 AM
So happy to see your poem. I missed you. I don't post as much but still enjoy writing here and my favorite people - You are one of them! Love you and God bless you too... also, the poem is excellent as usual.
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace