Minds Journey

" Minds Journey "

Today, I took a Minds Journey
oh, the great things I did see
my minds eye, saw a flood upon the earth
with a parting of the sea.

Carefully watching, the building of a temple
so beautiful and so grand
looking I saw, a huge multitude of people traveling
across the dry empty land.

I closely watched, a big mean giant
fight a tiny little boy
seeing, the giant fell and took a tumble
as though he were a playful little toy.

Carefully watching, a huge city under siege
with many, many, people marching around
looking and hearing, the loud sound of trumpets
as the city walls came tumbling down.

I saw, a bush on the side of a mountain
suddenly burst into burning flames
watching and hearing, a voice come out of Heaven
calling out someone’s name.

I am not crazy at all, this is very true
where my Minds Journey went, you can go too
our Bible of God, led me all the way
through my words of poetry, I share with you today.

There is so much more, that you really should see
we all can live forever, through everlasting eternity
the beauty of life and nature, all created by thee
thanks for sharing my Minds Journey, for coming with me...

Penned By MPK

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008



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Date: 7/9/2008 3:52:00 PM
You are such an inspiration....Love your work, Always, Christy
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Date: 7/9/2008 3:03:00 PM
The pleasure was all mine - wonderful poetry - quite the journey
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Date: 7/9/2008 3:01:00 PM
Patricia, I admire receiving this comment from you as you are such an inspiration and I am so Honored by You. Thank You for your kindness Patricia. MPK
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Date: 7/9/2008 2:50:00 PM
Nice to meet you. Wow! You sure know how to tell a story hun. This is very well written and has a excellent flow. Wonderful message as well.I truly enjoyed! I look forward to reading more of your outstanding poetry in the future! Friends in Poetry....Love Light Truth Patricia
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