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Mindless Days

Mindless Days On Monday as I walked along, to my surprise my mind had gone! On checking where it should belong no mind there I thought... there's none! On Tuesday as I walked along, as you may have guessed my mind's still gone! But the voices now belong in there and I'm insane but I don't care! On Wednesday as I walked along third day in you guessed it gone! A funny thought came and then it went Did I say funny? strange I meant! On Thursday as I walked along, my mind's not there its solid gone! Will tomorrow find it's wandered back? or it could be insight that I lack! On Friday as I walked along, I've checked again but the bugger's gone! Is it hiding out or around somewhere? But where that is I'm unaware! On Saturday as I walked along, I accepted then my mind was gone! And maybe now its gone for good, Give up? then I guess I should! But on Sunday as I walked along My mind came back, no longer gone! I laugh and cry, then I suddenly think Mindless days just really stink!

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Date: 1/30/2016 10:50:00 AM
Janice,, A great pleasure to find and read your pen today. Love ** SKAT **
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Date: 6/23/2012 4:08:00 PM
Funny write, Janice. I enjoyed reading your poem. Reminded me of myself. I guess we all have days like that. Love, Kim
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Date: 6/23/2012 2:50:00 PM
great write Janice,loved it,check out my Mad,Insane,Mad,think you will like
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Date: 6/23/2012 2:28:00 PM
Yes, so true "they really stink" ....lol.... - Well done. - oxox love Anne-Lise
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Date: 6/23/2012 2:23:00 PM
Yes, I hate those days that my whole body including my thinking process is totally out of it...Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Sara
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