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Mindful of Struggle

Mindful of struggle between heav’n and hell, do not wrap thyself in immorality. each day’s a choice to don a belt, a breastplate, shoes, a helmet, hold up a Roman-sized shield, and wield a two-edged sword. Yes, don the armor of God. Don’t forget to bend your knees, to pray, praise and give thanks. For there’s a father wanting to treat his child to an all-encompassing eternity - it’s wild; the Creator’s imagination. It’s where all struggle strangulates, death and hell disappear from sight. It’s life, baby, it’s life! 4/29/2022

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Date: 5/9/2022 5:36:00 PM
Loved your closing lines, Kim. Write On! Bill
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/10/2022 7:16:00 AM
Thank you, Bill!
Date: 5/5/2022 1:39:00 AM
"Don’t forget to bend your knees, to pray, praise and give thanks." - how can we forget this?
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/6/2022 10:27:00 AM
Truth!
Date: 5/2/2022 6:49:00 PM
When the going gets tough, the tough get going, alright... Nicely done, Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/2/2022 7:12:00 PM
Thank you, tough guy! :)
Date: 5/2/2022 12:34:00 PM
This is very inspirational. Loved it. Hugs.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/2/2022 3:28:00 PM
Thank you, dear Victor.!

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