Mindful Eye

push and pull
of life’s pulse
subtle rhythm

we sense it
pulsating
forever

blissful peace
pervades form
time dissolves

26-March-2023
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Blown Avatar
March 26, 2023 at 9:30 PM
...gosh almighty....shakespearean; thou'st sound of....some author-ship sailing winds of....a philosophical-academia nature so... then...cofcof....might it be thou'st writ-ten minutes here or there and published that time in a book form......stan lee
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March 27, 2023 at 1:06 AM
:)
Salehi Avatar
March 26, 2023 at 9:32 AM
It's always a solvent, never a solution...
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March 27, 2023 at 1:06 AM
Thanks for visiting, PS
Blown Avatar
March 26, 2023 at 6:06 AM
...'a mind-full eye'....preoccupied? : ) have a good day.....stan
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March 27, 2023 at 1:05 AM
Mindful in as attentive without agenda
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