Mind Your Words

Mind Your Words

Some thoughts trickle through your mind like grains on a beach through 
                       the hand that writes in the sand with heart blood and a rock pool of soul 

Other images flood the gates unlock at great speed the secrets of minds
                      too restless to mind their own business tentacles twisted ink everywhere

They flow and bow to the rainbow gurgle pushed and pulled by the moon
                         and beyond dark sides of grey mattered hemispheres lightening flashes

While they unravel loops and scoops up and down brain’s crevices they
                    synthesize mitigate stream consciousness like a river never quite the same

But finding its bed nevertheless on some way to the ocean like a tribute
                   they contribute to the delta condense and evaporate then rain down again

Words however can be like corals congers razor blade canyons below a
                    surface of meaning once out never back in the genie some cuts never heal

Self talk is a fine feast for pontoons of one’s mooring and a dash with a splash
        spoken words to others though are entangled and uttered you can’t get them back

07th November 2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Gupta Avatar
November 7, 2016 at 8:05 AM
Fabulous ... beautiful ... Needs repeated readings to appreciate the grandeur of the similes and metaphors ...
Kannan Avatar
November 7, 2016 at 6:53 AM
So true... Beautifully described the impact of words...A big 7...Loved it...
Capitano Avatar
November 7, 2016 at 6:46 AM
Words have whatever power we give them; well laid out poem both structurally and metaphorically.
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