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Mind with a view

A pale green, hairy, rough, strong stalk Holds her up high every morn to sun her, She, a brown dial of Fibonacci florets with Decorated rays of pleasant yellow petals, the Soil beneath works hard to keep them both strong Ah! The orchestrated visual treat of sun lover flower.

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Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 6/26/2024 8:44:00 AM

Dear Thriveni, I loved how you celebrated the beauty and complexity of nature. I am a big fan of nature and love Sunflowers! I also like how you showed how sun, soil, and flowers work together to make life in a very orchestrated way. Your poem helped me to appreciate nature even more. – Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel

thriveni c mysore
Date: 6/26/2024 6:53:00 PM

Your kind visit and words brings joy. I am grateful for your amazing insight. I agree we just see the swan, not her foot work beneath water, usually. Thank you dear poet for the blessings.