Mind Tricks

Poet's Notes
(Show)

Become a Premium Member and post notes and photos about your poem like Kim Rodrigues.


when shelves are bare,
Old Mother Hubbard…
when bread, butter and eggs
only find themselves
on a politician’s spread,
will we still believe
what the Jedi says?

1/13/2022

Copyright © | Year Posted 2022



Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 1/14/2022 11:12:00 PM
Hi Kim, people are returning from the Christmas holidays in the thousands and filling up pantries and fridges, children returning to school etc. Therefore supermarkets, stationery shops and shops that sell school uniforms, their shelves will be somewhat empty, but fill up soon again I'm sure, hope I'm somewhat right in my interpretation of your write. Great poetry. Hugs, blessings, Jennifer.
Login to Reply
Date: 1/14/2022 2:54:00 PM
Funny poem Kim. I don't think people are drinking their Kool-Aid any more. Kudo's on the write. Blessings ~ Debra
Login to Reply
Rodrigues Avatar
Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/14/2022 9:01:00 PM
Thank you, Debra!
Date: 1/13/2022 7:24:00 PM
An attempt of political justification by some, doesn't change the reality of what's at hand. An excellent inquiry, with humor on the side! Nicely done!!ab
Login to Reply
Rodrigues Avatar
Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/13/2022 8:02:00 PM
Thank you, Anselmo!
Date: 1/13/2022 6:52:00 PM
oh inflation is out of control. Your poetry speaks to so much!
Login to Reply
Rodrigues Avatar
Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/13/2022 6:55:00 PM
Thank you, Robert!
Date: 1/13/2022 6:25:00 PM
Terribly funny! Totally hilarious. Down, up and away! :) gw
Login to Reply
Rodrigues Avatar
Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/13/2022 6:54:00 PM
LOL! You have me laughing too.
Date: 1/13/2022 9:31:00 AM
I agree with what Andrea said, Kim. What did the Jedi say????
Login to Reply
Rodrigues Avatar
Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/13/2022 9:33:00 AM
Not fixed on any particular one just the direction we are going in. We can pretend but it will come our way. Hoping people get back to work and we see violence fall and shelves and lives back in order.
Date: 1/13/2022 9:18:00 AM
IN Malta, most corrupt people treat themselves on our taxes. Hugs.
Login to Reply
Rodrigues Avatar
Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/13/2022 9:29:00 AM
True…all too true!
Date: 1/13/2022 8:53:00 AM
I can't remember what the Jedi said, but I sure like your poem, Kim.
Login to Reply
Rodrigues Avatar
Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/13/2022 9:31:00 AM
The Jedi would make people say and believe what he said. Thanks, sweet lady! I don’t know if you are finding bare shelves but we are. Disconcerting.
Get a Premium Membership
Get more exposure for your poetry and more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Reflection on the Important Things

Member Area

My Admin
Profile and Settings
Edit My Poems
Edit My Quotes
Edit My Short Stories
Edit My Articles
My Comments Inboxes
My Comments Outboxes
Soup Mail
Poetry Contests
Contest Results/Status
Followers
Poems of Poets I Follow
Friend Builder

Soup Social

Poetry Forum
New/Upcoming Features
The Wall
Soup Facebook Page
Who is Online
Link to Us

Member Poems

Poems - Top 100 New
Poems - Top 100 All-Time
Poems - Best
Poems - by Topic
Poems - New (All)
Poems - New (PM)
Poems - New by Poet
Poems - Read
Poems - Unread

Member Poets

Poets - Best New
Poets - New
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems Recent
Poets - Top 100 Community
Poets - Top 100 Contest

Famous Poems

Famous Poems - African American
Famous Poems - Best
Famous Poems - Classical
Famous Poems - English
Famous Poems - Haiku
Famous Poems - Love
Famous Poems - Short
Famous Poems - Top 100

Famous Poets

Famous Poets - Living
Famous Poets - Most Popular
Famous Poets - Top 100
Famous Poets - Best
Famous Poets - Women
Famous Poets - African American
Famous Poets - Beat
Famous Poets - Cinquain
Famous Poets - Classical
Famous Poets - English
Famous Poets - Haiku
Famous Poets - Hindi
Famous Poets - Jewish
Famous Poets - Love
Famous Poets - Metaphysical
Famous Poets - Modern
Famous Poets - Punjabi
Famous Poets - Romantic
Famous Poets - Spanish
Famous Poets - Suicidal
Famous Poets - Urdu
Famous Poets - War

Poetry Resources

Anagrams
Bible
Book Store
Character Counter
Cliché Finder
Poetry Clichés
Common Words
Copyright Information
Grammar
Grammar Checker
Homonym
Homophones
How to Write a Poem
Lyrics
Love Poem Generator
New Poetic Forms
Plagiarism Checker
Poetics
Poetry Art
Publishing
Random Word Generator
Spell Checker
Store
What is Good Poetry?
Word Counter