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Mind the Paint

Mind the wet paint. My mind is just simple and quaint. A breath that strolls in the morning, slumbers while the sun is not shining. Of style and originality, an art gallery made of various sizes of canvas color palette of madness; abstract scenes of hopes and dreams, a universe trying to break free, hungry as the sea. Splashes of summer, fall, winter, and spring. Whiz it sometimes does bring. Touched with inner muse, florets of cardinal hues, an abstract mind still creating, nor yet set. Now, mind that the paints still wet. ~ chocolate egg shell stashed full of colored foil treats please do not disturb 3/13/2018
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Gauthier Avatar
April 9, 2018 at 9:18 PM
Lovely, Eve. Congrats on your well deserved win.
Haight Avatar
March 24, 2018 at 10:01 AM
A wonderful presentation of your amazing creativity, Eve! Congratulations on your fine podium win. Hugs, Sandra
Talbot Avatar
March 22, 2018 at 8:30 PM
Whoops, nearly smudged it, lol! Just couldn't resist the chocolates, pinched two, very tasty, reminiscent of your poem! Congratulations Eve... Mick
Allison Avatar
March 22, 2018 at 1:28 PM
your creativity shines out in every line Eve, many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
Steele Avatar
March 22, 2018 at 10:00 AM
Eve, congrats on your win. I loved reading this poem; so creative. Well deserved.
Pett Avatar
March 22, 2018 at 8:50 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Eve, thoroughly enjoyed reading your well written poem. :))
Cunningham Avatar
March 22, 2018 at 6:23 AM
Congratulations Eve
Moorman Avatar
March 22, 2018 at 5:24 AM
Eve, as I read this, I could only think if people could really see our mind they would want theirs to be like yours. Congrats on your win.
Wigley Avatar
March 22, 2018 at 4:37 AM
Congrats, Eve, on a lovely piece, and thanks for entering my contest. Viv x
Sinha-Roy Avatar
March 22, 2018 at 4:18 AM
Congratulations, Eve on your fine win. Great imagery.
Gentry Avatar
March 19, 2018 at 9:09 PM
Great imagery and style. Good luck in contest.
Callus Avatar
March 16, 2018 at 11:41 AM
What a lovely creative take on this contest theme, Eve! As Victor said, we don't paint eggs in Malta, but I used to wrap eggs in outer onion skins and hard boil them till they became covered in reddish brownish colours. Hugs // paul
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March 14, 2018 at 9:35 AM
Great idea for the contest Eve..
Andresen Avatar
March 14, 2018 at 8:32 AM
- Enjoy your chocolate, Eve ... I just read your lovely poem in silence - Best wishes in the contest - We painted eggs in our childhood :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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