Mind Over Matter

Life can be beautiful if one chooses mind over matter; then again life may matter more than choice.
written January 13, 2022
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Krutsinger Avatar
January 17, 2022 at 3:48 AM
"life may matter more than choice" - I believe this.
Hankins Avatar
January 17, 2022 at 8:44 AM
Something to think about, isn't it?
Rigoler Avatar
January 14, 2022 at 10:37 AM
Mind over matteris like the month of January, named after Janus the Roman god who had two faces: one looked behind, the other ahead. / Maurice
Hankins Avatar
January 14, 2022 at 11:17 AM
Indeed. Thanks for your thoughts, my friend.
Lawless Avatar
January 14, 2022 at 9:38 AM
In relation to the quandary of "mind over matter" it has been theorized that "if you don't mind, it don't matter"....
Hankins Avatar
January 14, 2022 at 10:10 AM
I believe there's a good bit of truth to that, John. But, when it comes to choices in life, it matters a great deal. I spent a good deal of time on this little piece, and I'm still not happy with the way it turned out. Oh, well.....
Poet Avatar
January 13, 2022 at 6:13 PM
The purpose of this one is to get us to ponder!! Milton, having the option is marvelous, even when the rules of nature restrict that option.
Hankins Avatar
January 13, 2022 at 7:08 PM
Yep, interesting thought for mulling, Lasaad. Thanks for your read and comment.
Baker Avatar
January 13, 2022 at 5:43 PM
Intriguing Milt, I like it. Have a great weekend my friend! Bill
Hankins Avatar
January 13, 2022 at 7:11 PM
Thanks, Bill. Same to you!
Kavanagh  Avatar
January 13, 2022 at 12:46 PM
Indeed it’s great to have choice Milton, even if it’s limited by matter, had to read this one a few times, I think it may have some tangential meanings, cheers David
Hankins Avatar
January 13, 2022 at 1:20 PM
Ah, so, David. I worked on this simple little verse for quite awhile, feeling there was something worthwhile to share in there. You have vindicated my thoughts. Thanks!
Dietrich Avatar
January 13, 2022 at 12:27 PM
One to make us think!!
Hankins Avatar
January 13, 2022 at 1:21 PM
Oh, Andrea...one that made me think! See my response to David.
Hargreaves Avatar
January 13, 2022 at 12:26 PM
Once we valued mind. Now we value matter. We have changed our mind But does this matter?
Hankins Avatar
January 13, 2022 at 1:23 PM
Hmmm...interesting conjecture and more interesting question, Tony. Thanks for your insightful comment. I wish I had an answer to your question. Like Gershon, I just writes them; I can't explains them!
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