Mind of the Heart

Written: February 23, 2025, for contest Sponsored by: Unseeking Seeker ************************ Line of inquiry: “feeling not thinking, soul with love linking ~ we attained God-consciousness unblinking” ************************ On wild paths, the spirit strolls untamed, Cosmic currents caress, creating a heart chase. Through twilight and triumph, we tackle the case, Gaea gear glimpses, an odyssey by the unframed. With spirits snared in love splendid spark, The moonlit odyssey hits before nightfall grace.  Stars spark splendid dreams in a sacred space, In tranquil thesis, trepidations tumble, in dark. Perceptions push as phantoms fade away, Beside booming ballads of bedrock bright. Reconnected with reality radiant sight, Empathetic ebbs eradicate errant astray. Divine warmth bestows clarity and a mind alight, Undying eyes greet whimsical ways of form. Incessant, ethereal embrace eclipses the norm, It bows to beseech, bright, blaze, and light. Past and raw stories swirl in the seawater, soaring willows weep wondrous, watery tears! As austere utterances unravel earthly fears, further facts flow from warm weak wander. Lovely litotes linger with sandy emotion, orogenic smiles in saffron specters soar! Pestilence purged by profound laws, lore! Smart minds evoke ethereal interaction. Minutes manifesting satori’s splendid shimmer, phantom imagines bending to uncanny wallow. Hadal heights where nocturnal nebulas follow, Ignite love's lingering legacy in cobalt skimmer.

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Date: 3/1/2025 5:28:00 AM
You are a master of rhyme, no doubt. The internal rhyme in this is just impeccable. To tell the truth your poem is too deep for me to grasp fully. When mind is ignited with love, we rise to God's consciousness. Congratulations, dear friend on your great win.
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Date: 2/28/2025 9:01:00 PM
magical words, dear poet congratulations on your win. cheers!!!
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Date: 2/25/2025 4:45:00 PM
Lovely cadence and beat. Felt a musical clapping. Liked this line : minutes manifesting satori’s splendid shimmer : shimmer is exactly how heart experiences satori. ThKU.
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Date: 2/24/2025 9:15:00 PM
Brilliant rhymes and youv chosen a form of poetry probably seeker will be thrilled to read as he nails these forms and owns them like no other on soup: a very impressive poem and your choice of rhymes cadence and metaphors is truly excellent! I love the alliterations too and how youve interpreted the line of enquiry is truly very impressive! With celestial imagery throughout used to convey what youv perceived! I love the oceanic metaphors the most. I just posted for this contest too. Pleasure reading this! Best wishes and sending you light today and always
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Date: 2/24/2025 10:10:00 AM
Nice poem.
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Date: 2/23/2025 8:14:00 PM
"Undying eyes greet whimsical ways of form" I wish that line was mine, LOL - beautiful, Sotto.
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Date: 2/23/2025 6:45:00 PM
SP, truly a lot going on in that heart of yours! I enjoyed seeing lovely litotes as it reflects they way we sometimes express our emotions. Readers won't be disappointed by your poem. I remain awed by what you do and also enjoy the music accompaniments you choose. Thanks for allowing me to feel happy and smile!
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