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Mind of a Serial Killer Vi

At last we have arrived to my special castle well hidden and disguised the moon is so bright tonight it looms in the shadows with delight with only one single light Gracefully I slide to your side taking your hands in mine giving a soft whisper of a warning to be kind or a quick blow across your neck I can bestow Your baby blue dress caressing and moving with grace from the gentle wind that blows upon my place for you my Sweet Devine I have a bed to thread and bind You seem to shiver from deep inside your face so pale and looking horrified your thoughts wondering what I have for you in mind My blood is boiling with such excitement as we near the door to my chamber of lore that I know you will come to adore Your beautiful eyes looking up to me showing nothing but hate and despise no longer showing fear as they used to appear "But Oh.. My Sweet Devine," you put on a good disguise but for me you will be my grand prize Into my house, my chamber we glide my hands held tight to your side with a flicker of light your eyes go wide with a faint you start to slide. Do You Feel Me? Do You Want More? T Reams 4/19/2015 copyright

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Date: 4/28/2015 12:36:00 AM
Exceptional write!!! I will have to look at the others to this thrilling series! <3 Always, Laura
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Date: 4/22/2015 8:01:00 AM
You are on a roll! Glad to see you have continued.
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Tammy Reams
Date: 4/22/2015 8:10:00 AM
Thank you. The ending will have a big twist.
Date: 4/20/2015 7:49:00 AM
I feel the tension here Tammy....and thanks for your comment...Peter.
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Tammy Reams
Date: 4/20/2015 8:24:00 AM
Thank you Peter- The ending will have a wild twist. Plan to write about 25 total.
Date: 4/19/2015 11:45:00 PM
Yeah, the painting is what i really wanted to end with I loved this, wowow Yeah' im happy #Tammy XOXOXO
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Emmanuel Brian Oule
Date: 4/21/2015 2:45:00 AM
Always welcome Reams, I will always stick a round to read your writings Hugs Dear,
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Tammy Reams
Date: 4/20/2015 8:26:00 AM
Thank you Bryan for the comment. Wait until the ending what a wild twist it will have!
Date: 4/19/2015 10:20:00 PM
Wonderful expressions Tammy!
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Tammy Reams
Date: 4/20/2015 8:26:00 AM
Thank you Dr. Upma for the comment.
Date: 4/19/2015 9:00:00 PM
Quite ah, devilish? Enjoyed the read, thanks Tammy!
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Tammy Reams
Date: 4/20/2015 8:32:00 AM
Thank you Mark. Check out 1-5 to get the whole picture.

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