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Mind of a Serial Killer

I have a thrill and a high profile skill
I must have dominance I will get your full confidence
I crave for lust even though you disgust
I control all things with you as you go on a stroll
I will make you bow down to me this will be your downfall
I am very intelligent as you become very diligent
I will stalk you as you start to feel distraught
I'm just your neighbor, or maybe a co-worker
Do You Feel Me? Do You Want More?


2/3/15  T Reams   copyright  Contest: 5th Place

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Dr. Upma A. Sharma Date: 9/1/2015 1:45:00 AM Wonderful write and a superb win! Big congrats Tammy! Wish i knew him! Login to Reply Tammy Reams Date: 9/1/2015 8:01:00 AM Thank you Dr. Upma. This is an on going write. I hope to have this series done within a month.

Shadow Hamilton Date: 7/24/2015 4:54:00 PM great Tammy you should read my poem Do You really know him hugs 7 fav Login to Reply Tammy Reams Date: 9/1/2015 8:00:00 AM Sorry this is very late but thank you for the comment. I will read your poem 'Do you really know him'.

Skat A Date: 7/13/2015 12:56:00 AM TAMMY, Congratulations on having your poem featured this coming week. **SKAT** Login to Reply Tammy Reams Date: 7/18/2015 6:46:00 AM Thank you SKAT- long hours at the restaurant has keep me from writing my poems- I will try to write a follow up this week to-'The Mind of a Serial Killer'

Laura Breidenthal Date: 4/28/2015 12:40:00 AM I love the repeating last line. "I will stalk you as you start to feel distraught"... love that line because it is chilling. I can relate to this extreme mind. Is this a bad thing?? Haha! Always, Laura Login to Reply

Richard Lamoureux Date: 4/2/2015 9:09:00 AM On to part two. Login to Reply Tammy Reams Date: 4/2/2015 10:55:00 AM Thank you Richard. I should have part 5 out this week.

Brooke Allen Date: 2/25/2015 3:10:00 PM I really liked the line "I am very intelligent as you become diligent," great poem! I really felt like these are the thoughts killers think, and you portrayed it well. Login to Reply Tammy Reams Date: 2/25/2015 4:42:00 PM Thank you very much for the great comment! I'm going to wait two more weeks and continue it to part three. You can read part two I have posted now. Again thank you!