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Mind of a Serial Killer

I have a thrill and a high profile skill I must have dominance I will get your full confidence I crave for lust even though you disgust I control all things with you as you go on a stroll I will make you bow down to me this will be your downfall I am very intelligent as you become very diligent I will stalk you as you start to feel distraught I'm just your neighbor, or maybe a co-worker Do You Feel Me? Do You Want More? 2/3/15 T Reams copyright Contest: 5th Place

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Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 9/1/2015 1:45:00 AM

Wonderful write and a superb win! Big congrats Tammy! Wish i knew him!

Tammy Reams
Date: 9/1/2015 8:01:00 AM

Thank you Dr. Upma. This is an on going write. I hope to have this series done within a month.

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 7/24/2015 4:54:00 PM

great Tammy you should read my poem Do You really know him hugs 7 fav

Tammy Reams
Date: 9/1/2015 8:00:00 AM

Sorry this is very late but thank you for the comment. I will read your poem 'Do you really know him'.

Skat A

Date: 7/13/2015 12:56:00 AM

TAMMY, Congratulations on having your poem featured this coming week. **SKAT**

Tammy Reams
Date: 7/18/2015 6:46:00 AM

Thank you SKAT- long hours at the restaurant has keep me from writing my poems- I will try to write a follow up this week to-'The Mind of a Serial Killer'

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 4/28/2015 12:40:00 AM

I love the repeating last line. "I will stalk you as you start to feel distraught"... love that line because it is chilling. I can relate to this extreme mind. Is this a bad thing?? Haha! Always, Laura

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 4/2/2015 9:09:00 AM

On to part two.

Tammy Reams
Date: 4/2/2015 10:55:00 AM

Thank you Richard. I should have part 5 out this week.

Brooke Allen

Date: 2/25/2015 3:10:00 PM

I really liked the line "I am very intelligent as you become diligent," great poem! I really felt like these are the thoughts killers think, and you portrayed it well.

Tammy Reams
Date: 2/25/2015 4:42:00 PM

Thank you very much for the great comment! I'm going to wait two more weeks and continue it to part three. You can read part two I have posted now. Again thank you!