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Mind of a Pesimist

Shakespeare brought good to life Human nature to find the person deep within Every man for himself Humans of individuality all so different Be stronger upon now The path of a different way lays before ourkind Community cut; slices our artery of connection No need to associate ourselves In times association sourced survival Once weak and nor wise - we die In times it masks of false happiness

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 10/14/2011 5:26:00 PM
Kind of reminds me that just when I think I know myself, fate deals a different hand. Your grasp on human nature is so well expressed in your rhyme.
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Claire Burke
Date: 10/24/2011 5:48:00 AM
Thank you so much for your kind comment, I wanted to do something different and deep plus I am studying to become a psychologist so I think a lot and am learning lots of unthought things too. Thank you x

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