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mind if i string along

i’ve more faith that a god believes in me ~ rather than i in some god

said a puppet to his master ~ my appendix looks fine yours is flawed 

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David Kavanagh

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Sally Eslinger

June 10, 2024 at 8:32 PM

About God, likewise here. When my bro was 10 & i, 6, he had his appendix out. When he returned from hosp,I kept begging 4 him to drink water. Everyone asked why i begged for that & i said i wanted to see the back up aft surgery opens! water run out…no one told me they sew

David Kavanagh

June 11, 2024 at 10:04 AM

That would have been a great party trick if you could see the water pour out after the operation lol, I think I’m on a slightly different wavelength here, who knows maybe I’m not! Cheers David

Sally Eslinger

June 10, 2024 at 8:36 PM

To see the water rush out, as no one told me they sew closed what the surgery opened. Sorry for the vast typo. Thanks for bringing back a memory

Paul Bell

June 7, 2024 at 2:41 AM

God is everywhere, the poster tells me, but just to remind you, you'll yell my name when your side really hurts. Why do puppets always stare at you.

David Kavanagh

June 7, 2024 at 5:11 AM

It’s probably a Carte Blanche kinda stare, no strings attached! Cheers David

Victor Buhagiar

June 6, 2024 at 1:52 AM

Loved the contrast. Quite witty.

David Kavanagh

June 6, 2024 at 3:00 AM

Thanks Victor, just below the wit, is perhaps a more interesting story, cheers David

I Am Anaya

June 5, 2024 at 7:06 PM

What I feel, with what little I know about our David is that I can rely in your faith within yourself, that's security. You are certainly secure, best quality. As for my interpret. I'm just happy I still have my appendix. Aha I learn from DD! Hey Dilly.

David Kavanagh

June 6, 2024 at 2:57 AM

Heya Anaya! Yes never mess about with any appendix, unless you’re sure it needs a little more scrutiny, a few extra layers are sometimes needed to be cut open, like in this monoku, to see a little clearer what we’re actually dealing with, cheers David

Paul Willason

June 4, 2024 at 4:15 PM

A very clever and subtle poem David....your work always engages the mind, reference the appendix. Just love how that brain of yours steps out of itself to grab a unique view. Keep em coming my friend.

David Kavanagh

June 5, 2024 at 12:37 AM

Some legerdemain with (appendix) here Paul, just seemed the obvious yet cryptic choice to bring this one together as seen from a few different perspectives, thank you so much, cheers David

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