John Lawless Poet Senryu

Mind Field

MIND FIELD

idle thoughts collide

                   in cacophonous chaos

                                         a 
                                                broken 
                                                                silence


John G, Lawless
©12/7/2017

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Andrea Dietrich December 14, 2017 at 8:20 PM very good one, JOhn. Love that broken line too!!!

FJ Thomas December 14, 2017 at 10:34 AM This says so much more than I think many realize. Wonderful write!

Paul Callus December 8, 2017 at 2:56 PM An excellent mental image, John. Ultimately that mind field becomes a mine field! Regards // paul

Judith S December 8, 2017 at 8:18 AM I learned a new word today :) Great write John!

Anisha Dutta December 7, 2017 at 11:22 PM WOW! Enjoyed Best Wishes

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart December 7, 2017 at 9:28 PM Oh yes. Fave :)