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Mind Field

MIND FIELD idle thoughts collide in cacophonous chaos a broken silence John G, Lawless ©12/7/2017

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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 12/14/2017 8:20:00 PM
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very good one, JOhn. Love that broken line too!!!
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Fj Thomas
Date: 12/14/2017 10:34:00 AM
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This says so much more than I think many realize. Wonderful write!
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Paul Callus
Date: 12/8/2017 2:56:00 PM
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An excellent mental image, John. Ultimately that mind field becomes a mine field! Regards // paul
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Judith S
Date: 12/8/2017 8:18:00 AM
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I learned a new word today :) Great write John!
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Anisha Dutta
Date: 12/7/2017 11:22:00 PM
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WOW! Enjoyed Best Wishes
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 12/7/2017 9:28:00 PM
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Oh yes. Fave :)
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