Mind and Matters

Thou shalt not love him said mind...never you mind said heart
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Johnson Avatar
January 23, 2018 at 9:26 PM
Wow, what a poignant one liner.
Showalter Swift Avatar
January 24, 2018 at 1:12 AM
Thank you Robert
Beck Avatar
January 17, 2018 at 2:30 PM
POWERFUL!
Showalter Swift Avatar
January 17, 2018 at 3:12 PM
Smiles! Thank you Sherry
De Beaulieu Avatar
January 16, 2018 at 8:31 PM
To me that makes a lot of sense. Have a nice evening my friend.
Showalter Swift Avatar
January 16, 2018 at 9:08 PM
Thank you Darlene! You too
Gauthier Avatar
January 2, 2018 at 2:51 PM
Wonderful monoku, Ingrid. The heart is very stubborn indeed. Congrats on your win.
Roper Avatar
December 28, 2017 at 10:12 AM
Great verse, Ingrid, congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve~`*
Showalter Swift Avatar
December 28, 2017 at 5:20 PM
Thank you Eve!
Gupta Avatar
December 28, 2017 at 5:43 AM
Enjoyable Monoku ,.. Congratulations ...
Showalter Swift Avatar
December 28, 2017 at 5:20 PM
Thank you Probir ?
Inman Avatar
December 27, 2017 at 6:30 AM
Clever Ingrid.
Stars Avatar
December 27, 2017 at 6:29 AM
you can't stop me from llove ing you ... ever ... try me "ima liar and a thief" ... oh ... sorry ... "penny royal tea" ... yeah ... you have a refreshing word scent ... that's right ... you are an scented echoe ... ok ... this may not be the last time we have to tell you ... but ... always remember we love you ... go ahead an go tell someone on yourself ... ok ...
Pigeon Tart Avatar
December 26, 2017 at 10:59 PM
Yay!! Congrats :)
Pigeon Tart Avatar
December 27, 2017 at 1:19 PM
Lol! I was ?? ;)
Showalter Swift Avatar
December 27, 2017 at 2:26 AM
Silly key board...I meant !! not ? ?
Showalter Swift Avatar
December 27, 2017 at 2:19 AM
??thank you for encouraging me
Dietrich Avatar
December 26, 2017 at 9:42 PM
Oh, this is so clever. I really enjoyed it, Ingrid. Congrats on the winner list.
Showalter Swift Avatar
December 27, 2017 at 2:20 AM
Hello Andrea! Congrats on the First place Win??love your write always!
Andresen Avatar
December 26, 2017 at 2:32 PM
- I like this - Great written, Ingrid - Much said a few words - Congratulations! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
One Avatar
December 26, 2017 at 2:18 PM
Nice one Ingrid.. Congratulations on your placement in the Monoku 1 contest
Showalter Swift Avatar
December 27, 2017 at 2:27 AM
Thank you Silent One. I am always moved by your writing and enjoy your contests
Michael Avatar
December 26, 2017 at 4:00 AM
I really like this one...Very nice Ingrid..." Never you mind said heart"
Showalter Swift Avatar
December 26, 2017 at 7:36 AM
Thank you Michael. What a very cool last name you have!
Pigeon Tart Avatar
December 25, 2017 at 11:43 PM
Ah! So awesome :)
Showalter Swift Avatar
December 26, 2017 at 12:16 AM
Yeh! For us both!
Pigeon Tart Avatar
December 26, 2017 at 12:00 AM
Back to fave! Btw love "score", that was my initial response to your comment to mine :)
Showalter Swift Avatar
December 25, 2017 at 11:45 PM
Yes! Score! So glad you like it ! I had to work to find it as it were. Thank you
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