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Mind and Decrepit Body

The palace decrepit once a symbol of splendor the guest rooms the dance halls the ceiling paintings what once seemed eternal now gradually falling apart unable to escape a child remains witnessing the end even in haste the palace cannot be rebuilt seated in a chair gazing up at the ceiling the decrepitude of the palace is the palace's concern the child smiles

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Date: 6/10/2025 12:59:00 PM
- Congratulations on your win in the contest ... great written, Shinsaku :) -
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Shinsaku Ashida
Date: 6/10/2025 1:14:00 PM
Dear Anne-Lise Andresen, Thank you so much for your kind congratulations! Your words mean a great deal. I’m truly encouraged and look forward to continuing my poetry journey. I hope you’ll drop by again and read more.

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