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Mind

Whirls and swirls
Drooling out a chime 
Playing along the tined walls of my mind
Eyes in a twist brain in a knot 
What I memorize is not what they recall 
Think one can know me?
Look once more into my mind
Locks and docks
Stones and untamed bridges
knocking doors and screaming windows
All shatter once they are able
Everything goes without a second thought 
In this darken blue mass of an object lost
Clouding storm circle like waiting sharks
My mind, my thoughts, my heart all go with no beat and no flow to follow

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 4/11/2016 7:19:00 PM
Excellent poem Mint. Welcome to Poetry Soup.
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Date: 4/11/2016 12:23:00 AM
Hi Mint, Nice first entry. Welcomecto poetry soup. Wish u a successful journey ahead........hugs
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Mint Sha
Date: 4/11/2016 1:59:00 AM
I thank you! i hope your journey is successful as well... hugs awell
Date: 4/10/2016 10:23:00 PM
Mint sha, WOW, i love this one... deep and awesome imagery. lINDA
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Mint Sha
Date: 4/11/2016 1:57:00 AM
thank you very much! it is nice to meet you!
Date: 4/10/2016 5:49:00 PM
I really like this Mint. It has a great pace to it. Have you been writing long? ...look forward to reading more from you...Welcome to PS
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Mint Sha
Date: 4/10/2016 8:31:00 PM
Thanks so much, and only a little while. I am very pleased to be here i love poetry and art.

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