mind

Deep in the mind

Deep in the mind
Deep in thoughts
I never know you for real.

I see a side that look like
I heard the voice that sounds like.

I cannot tell who you are
I have to wonder if it was a woe

Today you nice
Tomorrow you are sour eye
Make up your mind who you want to be.

I am tired of guesting 
I am frustrated 
I keep asking please tell me

It hard for me to see you through
I am not a mind reader I am just me.
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Agustin Avatar
August 12, 2026 at 7:39 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Smith  Avatar
August 9, 2026 at 1:52 AM
Yes we are not mind readers. We can observe and offer comfort. Sometimes you don't know what's wrong you just feel wrong. To have someone who sees you is a help in a black mind.❤️
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