Mince Meat Sky High Pie 2016-6

“This is gonna be good” I'm gonna dice it slice it half it whole it fork it knife it and spoon feed it…. to myself You may say Oh drop it! Stop it ! chop it crop it lop it flop it or hop it if you must! Cause I really know how to beat it break it take it fake it forsake it and make it …completely annoying But ….you can’t say I didn’t minced it rinse it create it debate it relay it and do it …my very own way (Apologies -actual form is a question??? I think it isn't one. Muse written)

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Teddy Kimathi

Date: 6/29/2016 2:30:00 AM

Now that's a unique free verse I would wish to own one, fine day, lolest. Congrats Ingrid, for your placement with this brilliant piece!! ;-)

Ingrid Showalter Swift
Date: 6/29/2016 8:51:00 AM

Hoot! thank you Teddy! Have'n fun with the Write!

Janice Canerdy

Date: 6/27/2016 9:18:00 AM

So creative, Ingrid! Congrats on your win! Janice

Ingrid Showalter Swift
Date: 6/28/2016 11:28:00 AM

Thank you Janice!

John Lawless

Date: 6/27/2016 8:39:00 AM

Way to go Ingrid!!! The "choppy" cadence and repetition almost had me singing this the second time I read it. Very interesting take on the theme. Thanks for participating in the contest.

Ingrid Showalter Swift
Date: 6/28/2016 11:27:00 AM

Hi John! Thank you for the nod!!!! :) Great fun competition! So glad you enjoyed it Ingrid