Mince Meat Sky High Pie 2016-6

“This is gonna be good” 
I'm gonna dice it
slice it
half it 
whole it
fork it 
knife it
and spoon feed it…. 
to myself

You may say 
Oh drop it!
Stop it !
chop it 
crop it
lop it
flop it 
or hop it if you must!
Cause I really know how to beat it
break it
take it
fake it
forsake it
and make it
…completely annoying

But ….you can’t say I didn’t 
minced it
rinse it 
create it
debate it
relay it 
and do it …my very own way

(Apologies -actual form is a question??? I think it isn't one. Muse written)
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Kimathi Avatar
June 29, 2016 at 2:30 AM
Now that's a unique free verse I would wish to own one, fine day, lolest. Congrats Ingrid, for your placement with this brilliant piece!! ;-)
Showalter Swift Avatar
June 29, 2016 at 8:51 AM
Hoot! thank you Teddy! Have'n fun with the Write!
Canerdy Avatar
June 27, 2016 at 9:18 AM
So creative, Ingrid! Congrats on your win! Janice
Showalter Swift Avatar
June 28, 2016 at 11:28 AM
Thank you Janice!
Lawless Avatar
June 27, 2016 at 8:39 AM
Way to go Ingrid!!! The "choppy" cadence and repetition almost had me singing this the second time I read it. Very interesting take on the theme. Thanks for participating in the contest.
Showalter Swift Avatar
June 28, 2016 at 11:27 AM
Hi John! Thank you for the nod!!!! :) Great fun competition! So glad you enjoyed it Ingrid
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