Mimosa and Pine

mimosa and pine
pink flowers brighten the street
       with southern comfort
sweet tea and summertime green
           speckled eyes reach for its light

6/18/2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Strand Avatar
June 20, 2020 at 11:47 PM
sweet tea and summer time green ..your imagist muse at its best Kim.Thank you for your comment today.
Rodrigues Avatar
June 21, 2020 at 7:59 AM
Thank you so much, Brian! :)
Michael Avatar
June 19, 2020 at 12:51 PM
An enchanting little write...
Rodrigues Avatar
June 21, 2020 at 8:00 AM
Thank you with a great big smile :)
Trifiatis Avatar
June 19, 2020 at 7:03 AM
Captivating summer display of beauty dearest, Kim. Hugs xxx
Rodrigues Avatar
June 19, 2020 at 12:20 PM
Thank you, dear friend! :)
Bangalee Avatar
June 19, 2020 at 1:46 AM
beautiful sharing....pleasure to read
Rodrigues Avatar
June 19, 2020 at 5:44 AM
Thank you, Mahtab!
Duet Avatar
June 18, 2020 at 8:51 PM
Love this summery poem, Kim. Makes me want a cool Mimosa! lol Carole :D
Rodrigues Avatar
June 18, 2020 at 9:28 PM
Cheers :)
Wolf Avatar
June 18, 2020 at 7:50 PM
I think that the Tanka is your trademark poetic style, Kim. You write them so well. This one is so image-laden, so appealing to all the sense. Bravo, Gershon
Rodrigues Avatar
June 18, 2020 at 9:28 PM
Thank you, Gershon! :)
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