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I dedicate this poem to Milton Hankins, in ParticipatIng in Andreas un-contest contest ' I started to Know you, and you were gone.' At times you were Prickly yet that began to thaw, you spoke from your Mind of that I'm sure' I sensed the honesty and value Such' I see many here miss you; you had their trust.! As a footnote the name Milton is the condensed of Milltown.' Which may mean Miltons ancestors came From such a town.? And my entry lines allude to such Or maybe its just a name picked st random Andrea might know?
Whirling thoughts yet mindful of forms Turn names observing; your letters borne' To the flowing race' unconscious streaming Guddling in grace to beam of myrid meanings Mill-town forebears, cast your form quite fine A boon to your peers here' hear hear.! I stand to applaud; the depth, of Miltons lines.'

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Date: 1/16/2023 10:04:00 PM
"A boon to your peers here' hear hear.!" - Great tribute to a great poet. Congratulations!
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Joe Maverick
Date: 1/17/2023 12:11:00 AM
Thank you Alex.' I appreciate A lot of the attributes that Milton held and his yearning For better ' we are all flawed Yet its a mark of how we Address such that is what Shows character and the Will to improve'
Date: 1/16/2023 2:29:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. A creative tribute write. Have a blessed day/week..............
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Joe Maverick
Date: 1/16/2023 4:59:00 PM
Paula thank you, God bless and keep you.'
Date: 1/16/2023 1:35:00 PM
thanks again for this, my friend. I finally closed this uncontest out.
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Joe Maverick
Date: 1/16/2023 1:48:00 PM
Good good Andrea thank you For letting me know.'
Date: 1/10/2023 9:01:00 AM
we all knew and appreciated his poetry, in our own special way, thank you for sharing this tribute Joe
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Joe Maverick
Date: 1/10/2023 2:27:00 PM
His prescence was felt here..I Certainly felt it also.' And he was Not at heart hard.' He was true Enough to look for amity and put Enmity to one side.' Thank you For commenting'
Date: 1/10/2023 6:24:00 AM
Great Tribute Joe. Well done :)
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Joe Maverick
Date: 1/10/2023 11:37:00 AM
Thank you Heidi, I always Appreciate directness and Milton Let you know his mind, if you Have that makeup there is room To improve in many different Ways, specially in relationships'
Date: 1/9/2023 8:32:00 PM
Beautiful tribute, my friend!!
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Joe Maverick
Date: 1/10/2023 2:30:00 PM
Thank you dear friend and Souper poetess.'
Date: 1/9/2023 5:18:00 PM
Nice Tribute Joe glad to see you posting...
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Joe Maverick
Date: 1/10/2023 2:30:00 PM
Hi Michael so good of you to Make this comment'

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