Milton

.                        "ice crystals on grass
                  glistening like pure gemstones
                     dawn winking at morning"...
An excerpt from "Ice Crystals on grass" by L. Milton Hankins
A poem composed of three haikus. I chose this haiku to show that Milton could write such beauty when he chose. Milton was so kind to me; I will miss him.                    

                            generous poet
         shared feelings straight from the heart
                       softly closed the door
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Calasibetta Avatar
February 16, 2023 at 9:07 AM
Ann, a very heartwarming tribute to Milton. He left us with the goodness and grace of his powerful words….but there seems to be a darkness since he “softly closed the door”.
Peck Avatar
April 20, 2023 at 9:47 AM
Maybe he had an illness he didn't want people to know about and, perhaps, pity him. I don't know that to be true, but it sounds like Milton.
May Avatar
January 18, 2023 at 8:55 AM
Ann, a very nice tribute to Milt
Rysha Avatar
January 17, 2023 at 5:56 AM
xoxo!
Alex Avatar
January 16, 2023 at 9:38 PM
Beautiful haiku. Great tribute. Congratulations!
Goldsmith Avatar
January 16, 2023 at 1:41 PM
Back with "Congratulations" on your win. Have a blessed day/week..............
Dietrich Avatar
January 16, 2023 at 1:17 PM
i love what you chose and thank you for paying tribute in my contest.
Gauthier Avatar
January 14, 2023 at 11:23 AM
beautiful ~
Maverick Avatar
January 10, 2023 at 12:17 PM
Up up and awway..' For this tribute to Milton Ann, very Good thoughts from you what better legacy Could a person wish for.?
Goldsmith Avatar
January 9, 2023 at 9:05 AM
A wonderful write. Have a blessed day..............
Messina Avatar
January 6, 2023 at 5:05 PM
Beautiful contribution from Milt's haiku...so touched that it was also written in my contest. Thanks also, Ann... for stopping by and commenting on my latest poem. Happy New Year to you and yours. Hugs Charlie :)
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
January 3, 2023 at 4:30 PM
An exceptionally fine tribute, Ann, of a remarkable soul writer, blessings and Aloha William
Wolf Avatar
January 2, 2023 at 6:37 PM
Wonderful selection to remember Milt by, Ann. Kudos, Gershon
Sands Avatar
January 2, 2023 at 3:29 PM
Hi Ann. That is definetly beautiful. And so nice as you write as well. A Fave for me :)
Andresen Avatar
January 2, 2023 at 1:21 PM
- Yes, it is a beauty ... your a lovely tribute, Ann -
Dietrich Avatar
January 2, 2023 at 10:54 AM
wow, this is So nice. hope you enter it in my un-contest. I really loved this ice haiku Milt wrote and yours as well.
Slaughter Avatar
January 2, 2023 at 10:45 AM
I read this piece by L M, as well, Ann, and I wholeheartedly agree with everything you say about it...and him.
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