Millions of Souls

Furious the pace of change
  Placid the calm of reflection
Millions of souls spinning through time
  Never pausing once for direction
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Rodrigues Avatar
October 4, 2020 at 5:47 AM
Love this, Gershon! A fave!
Duncan Avatar
October 3, 2020 at 4:44 PM
Yup! we all should stop and look at our own reflections :-)
Devonshire Avatar
October 1, 2020 at 10:59 AM
Your poem reminds me of a theory that all events in "time" are occurring at once. But I can also see souls crossing paths - some bound for heaven and others for earth. You said quite a lot in a short verse, Gordon. Very interesting!
Wolf Avatar
October 1, 2020 at 2:49 PM
Thank you for the interesting comment about all events 'in time' occurring at once. Time is such an elastic concept. Thanks for the encouragement, Carolyn! Happy Thursday, Gershon
Andresen Avatar
October 1, 2020 at 2:49 AM
- Millions ... is really a low number ... (if the soul lives forever :) - Great written, Gershon :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Wolf Avatar
October 1, 2020 at 2:52 PM
You're right, of course, Anne-Lise: It should be 'billions of souls.' Just didn't like the sound of 'billions' in the poem. Sounded like Trump-ish hyperbole somehow. lol. Thanks for the support, Gershon
Buehler Avatar
September 30, 2020 at 10:12 PM
Brilliant and thought provoking verse, Gershon. It is interesting to stop and think of so many different lives being lived in one place, all at the same time. Best wishes, Evelyn :)
Wolf Avatar
October 1, 2020 at 2:54 PM
Very kind of you to call this 'brilliant,' Evelyn. Your support is appreciated and treasured. Happy Thursday, Gershon
Gauthier Avatar
September 30, 2020 at 9:34 PM
Interesting piece, Gershon. Impressive visual ~
Wolf Avatar
October 1, 2020 at 2:57 PM
Thank you for a comment to treasure, Line. Happy Thursday, Gershon
Faulkner Avatar
September 30, 2020 at 8:52 PM
We all need to take moments for placid reflection to face all these extreme changes, very well put ~
Wolf Avatar
October 1, 2020 at 3:02 PM
Thank you for the encouraging words, Michelle. Peace and Serenity, Gershon
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