Milky Way

Time has no meaning 
As our bodies melt as one 
The Universe stills 
The stars sliding to a halt 
creating the Milky Way
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Maverick Avatar
July 16, 2017 at 1:31 AM
Hello Paula, congrats on the feature here, imagination and possibilty entwine very finely Here, I hope alls well.
Devnath  Avatar
July 15, 2017 at 2:52 PM
Beautiful poem read from you my dear friend. Loved always, bl
Jordan Avatar
July 14, 2017 at 2:51 PM
Paula, nice piece of work! Especially, "The stars sliding to a halt." Keep writing my friend. Many blessings Ken
Kendrick Avatar
February 2, 2010 at 3:52 PM
Interesting thoughts put to pen. Keep the stars flowing from your pen. Sara
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