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Written July 22 2026

Milky Way

Milky Way pours stars
spilling orange pekoe sun mars
like hot onyx tea
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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July 27, 2026 at 8:45 AM
Karen, many congratulations on your contest win with this fantastic Haiku.
Jones Avatar
July 27, 2026 at 12:39 PM
Thank you kindly Sotto!
Guptar Avatar
July 27, 2026 at 7:50 AM
Congratulations Karen on your placement in this contest with a lovely haiku on the milky way, with some colourful imagery. Wish you a pleasant day.
Jones Avatar
July 27, 2026 at 12:38 PM
I appreciate that Krishnanand! Thanks!
Dietrich Avatar
July 27, 2026 at 1:09 AM
Groovy imagery. Hurray! You placed in Brian's contest.
Jones Avatar
July 27, 2026 at 3:44 AM
Wow! I did??? Thanks I didn’t know.
Harp Avatar
July 22, 2026 at 11:28 PM
What a lovely haiku, Karen. Well done! Moon Harp
Jones Avatar
July 23, 2026 at 1:40 AM
You are kind and thanks Moon Harp!
Rodrigues Avatar
July 22, 2026 at 4:54 AM
You have a way with words, dear Karen!
Jones Avatar
July 22, 2026 at 6:26 AM
Really? I don’t feel my poems are as great as many on soup. But thank you Kim!
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