Milkshake Man

I am an extraordinary dairy man,
I really give that milk a shake,
I whir it on my mixer,
I think you should partake.

I have such scrumptious flavours,
I'll put a dob of ice-cream in,
Your taste buds will go ballistic,
Just as soon as you begin.

There you go, drink it up,
Well, what did you think of that?
I think it tastes so very nice,
But, will it make me fat?


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Date: 3/28/2015 8:06:00 AM
The descriptive wording and the great imagery bring this piece to life. Emile.
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Date: 3/29/2015 7:32:00 PM
Hi Emile, Thank you for reading my poem. I just love a good milkshake. It's just a shame I'm battling to get through my front door now. Kind regards----John
Date: 3/26/2015 1:13:00 PM
- Tastes surely gorgeous ..... but ... with lots of calories .... - Nice to read, a great poem with a smile behind your pen John :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/26/2015 5:09:00 PM
I am so glad you enjoyed the poem Anne Lise & it gave you a chuckle. I try to write just about every poem with a little humour because it's nice to make people smile. Kind regards----John
Date: 3/25/2015 2:39:00 PM
Sure it might make you fat if you just sit there...take it with you and take a nice walk....nice
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Date: 3/25/2015 4:55:00 PM
I tried that once Tim, I spilled it down my front & stuck the straw in my eye. But I have to tell you Tim I don't like walking much I usually jog. Thank you very much for reading my poem, it is much appreciated Tim. Kind regards----John
Date: 3/25/2015 2:17:00 AM
Very nice pen John!I enjoyed reading your sweet children' poem, dear friend. Enjoyed it!A 7! Wishing you a very lovely day! In his light! God bless you! :-) D.
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Date: 3/25/2015 2:55:00 AM
Thank you Dorian for your lovely comment & for reading my poem. Kind regards--------John {Australia}
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