Milking Time

Milking time


breaking dawn, the sun slowly rising in the east
as early morning mist evaporates, all is quiet and still
in the distance, a cow bellows.
a cottage door opens and a maid emerges.
in her hands the milking stool and pail
later she returns to the dairy

      cows gather at gate
black dogs yapping at their heels
      the milkmaid awaits

     welcome the warm byre 
maid rests her head on cow’s flank
     creamy milk pours forth
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Kendrick Avatar
January 8, 2025 at 5:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning work in Brian's contest. Way to go. I enjoyed reading it today. Sara K
Agustin Avatar
December 31, 2024 at 2:24 AM
Wow! Congrats. Thanks for sharing this. May God bless you with a prosperous New Year.
Mcintosh Avatar
December 30, 2024 at 2:06 PM
I love milking! We had a milk cow a couple of years ago that I was crazy over. A freak accident took her, but I will forever remember that girl. She gave us so much butter and cheese along with those soulful eyes that seemed so kind and like a soft embrace. God bless you and Congrats. Love, Gina
Foster Avatar
December 30, 2024 at 5:37 PM
Thank you, Regina. Yes, the soulful eyes will get you every time. My little dog has them so I know exactly what you mean.
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