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MILK milk like lit candle ascending the dark victorian stairs ethereal ascension of an angel liquid coats the throat of intended beams of light shoot out through her eyes spiritual duet of contradiction darkness and innocence meet in stare penetrating deep into each other’s soul diluting the contrast of dark and light shadows that keep them apart 7/19/2017 Strand’s Mid-Summer Standard Contest 1st Place

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Date: 7/20/2017 11:50:00 PM
Congrats on the win Kim. Particularly enjoyed the imagery on the positioning of the lines. :)
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Date: 7/20/2017 5:42:00 PM
Wow! Creatively brilliant poetry, Kim. The thoughts elevate and descend w/each passing phrase. A mind bender is what we free thinkers love always to experience. A joy to read this stellar write. Love always.
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Date: 7/20/2017 5:32:00 PM
Congrats on your win Kim
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Date: 7/20/2017 4:56:00 PM
This is wonderful, Kim - exquisite! Congrats on win, my friend! :-)
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Date: 7/19/2017 5:25:00 PM
A milky smooth write Kim...the moos have it lol...^WW^
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/19/2017 6:51:00 PM
How a-moos-ing! thanks :)
Date: 7/19/2017 8:37:00 AM
This is so beautiful!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/19/2017 11:25:00 AM
Thank you, Mike :)

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