Miles - Word Prism

This is so cool! I like how you put this together Paige. I read it again and just enjoy!

just wow from the get go!

Just admiring this one again. So cool

"Miles - Word Prism" is a creative write. I enjoyed reading. "Good Luck" I did Angel ~ A Word Prism. Have a creative/fun day writing away...............

Paige, you always leave a "space" for musings to live, like water filling in a space. If this is for a contest, best wishes! May blessings fill each one of your spaces.

poignant words and thought provoking....space conjures up all types of ideas and thoughts. Well done..faving

Deeply moving and profoundly impactful! Wishing you all the best in the contest! May your light shine bright.

Poignant and powerful! Good luck if for contest!

' the very first day where you left the womb. ' That thought is powerful, Paige. Miles to go, into the unknown. Your thoughts are tender and beautiful. Hugs, Brandy

You are like Shakespeare in the sense that your lines would make for fascinating discussion, breaking down each of them one by one to get into your head intentions with each written word as a deliberate set up for the next word. Fascinating, I cannot write this way, it doesn't live in me as it does you. Again, I leave you the word fascinating. (I just checked the contest requirements, read poem again and BAM it all came together for me, Brilliant!)

Yes !! I get the sound now. Don’t mind my suggestions. I make them with good intentions to improve our craft. Or we all stagnate in glow glibs, just to get a placing on a community chart. Love Xx.

Very cool poem, Paige. I really like when you write this way.

Fascinating prism for Miles, Paige. Good juxtaposition between spacial & concrete. Perhaps think about strengthening the sound ? Have goodie day/night. Great Love. X